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Time (Free verse) by berdabear
Reflection on troubles I left behind,
of those I've yet to see.
Cry for changes I could not control,
and those for which I'm to blame.
I turned my eyes forward in search of a change I really need, but never
turned my heart on what I left behind.
Accepted changes I cannot control,
took responsibility for where I'm to blame.
Reflection on memories of the changes I found,
excited for those I've yet to see.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8145
Posted: April 10, 2008 12:29 PM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2008 12:29 PM PDT
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