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Time (Free verse) by berdabear
Reflection on troubles I left behind, of those I've yet to see. Cry for changes I could not control, and those for which I'm to blame. I turned my eyes forward in search of a change I really need, but never turned my heart on what I left behind. Accepted changes I cannot control, took responsibility for where I'm to blame. Reflection on memories of the changes I found, excited for those I've yet to see.

Up the ladder: procrastination
Down the ladder: Eclipse

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8151
Posted: April 10, 2008 12:29 PM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2008 12:29 PM PDT
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