poemranker ::Wednesday, darling you complete me forever. by T. Jonathron Remp

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Ode № 156245

Wednesday, darling you complete me forever.

Member since 2004 · Posted 19 Oct 2008 · 0 comments

You flow, hair You flow, from where? Way below the skin, you begin. You push through like a subway route. You do not grow on trout. or "You do not grow on fruit." depending on how you pronounced the last line. Hair, so fair, so fine. You are the glue that holds civilized society together without exception. You stand tall during piloerection. What hairy perfection. Hair, you dare to dream You dare to weave, hair. Long, short, none, ingrown. Air dried, wind blown. Tomorrow morning I will leave you a pillow mint Because you are my favorite protein filament.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 5.00 weighted 5.00 rank 8140 views 265 View voting details →

1 vote so far. Yours would make 2.1 vote so far

0 comments

Nobody has said anything yet.