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Puddles Of Blood (Free verse) by misused
Puddles of blood lay on the floor next to the blade she screams but covers her mouth dont make a sound its ok just clean it up she says. the bloods on the rag quick throw it away you can see the blood on her sleave quick change before they see. she finds a shirt and slips it on as she sees her sister in her room "why do you hurt your self?" she says trying to hold back the tears. "im sorry dont tell mom" i say as the the tears fall down my face to the floor the sisters hold each other in their arms its ok they say its ok.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8157
Posted: April 3, 2008 8:06 PM PDT; Last modified: April 3, 2008 8:06 PM PDT
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