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beginnings (Free verse) by redleaffalling
saturdaynight
morning sounds tempting
to be awake,
but let us sleep our dreams
into midnight falls.
feels like dawn again,
i wish i could
do things a better way,
though no other way
can change it around.
play this game
but let us win, this one.
it's worth the trophy,
it's so much better
than sitting in.
sundaymorning
morning calls for another run
to get away from your heart,
your home returns to you;
day-after-day;
wondering if the sun
will ever turn cold.
moments to cross the line;
pushing above the border;
fear feelings.
hurtful beginnings
only to come.
but winners don't want
to die out that easily.
saturdaynight
sundaymorning
it doesn't really matter.
it won't hold for long.
look for the next day
in you;
and fly to your beginnings.
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Posted: October 29, 2007 8:44 PM PDT; Last modified: October 29, 2007 8:44 PM PDT
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