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Her tears

Member since 2008 · Posted 17 Jun 2008 · 1 comment

Her make-up is smearing, She has tears in her eyes. He just walks away, not even caring. She doesn't know what to do. Because those tears she's crying, They're all for him. She wonders why she's even trying. Her life; it falls down before her. He doesn't get it, He meant the world to her. You wouldn't understand how much it hurts to get hit, straight to the heart. Unable to fight back, And unable to get up. She thought they had made a pact, Never to break each other's hearts. She thought his words were pure sincerity. She believed every word he has ever said. But now he has driven her to absolute insanity, Because she knows that he will never come back to her. As her tears are subsiding, She thinks about him one last time. She trys to explain why she is really crying. Is it really because she loves him? Or is it because he doesn't want her?

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[2] nentwined 26-Jun-08/8:36 PM Reply
the tears aren't for him, really. and this poem isn't for anyone but the writer.