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Wanted You To Know (Free verse) by forsaken
I just wanted you to know So please listen before I have to go That when I'm having a bad day Those days when the clouds chase the sun away Sadly you know exactly what I mean When there's not even the thought of light to be seen Times when I fall to my knees and fight to get to my feet Those are the days I'm glad we had the chance to meet Sometimes I spend a night just drinking in a bar It just isn't enough but there hasn't been a hardtime so far That I don't start feeling better by talking with you Without you I might have never found the strength to not have left my heart in two I just wanted you to know this That when I think of who I most miss Your smiles is the first thing that comes to mind And I just wanted you to know that if I could search the heavens you' d be the only angel I could find

Up the ladder: Help The Aged
Down the ladder: Unhearted

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 7.055193
Overall Rank: 21
Posted: September 29, 2007 1:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2007 1:02 PM PDT
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