Lyric № 84151

Unhearted

Member since 2002 · Posted 31 Jan 2004 · 4 comments

I canât force whatâs between us Nor figure if love is inside But baby we could only trust What our hearts are trying to hide No matter how much I know Couldnât get a degree in romance So we must let everything go Cause weâre together as one big chance (Chorus) I can never become cupid Even though I always try Having you isnât an idea stupid Only a possibility in life No control of whatâs at stake Just a risk that we must take Voices you hear are very simple Telling to get out while you can Not like I can live without you here And Iâm not some kind of quick sand Our goals are too fast to chase We always pull each other backwards Canât blame you if you push me away For I wanted just to be a loving factor (Chorus) With all this time Canât tell the difference Between our love Between ourselves Reality has crashed down Been blown to separate worlds Always end up together somehow Everlasting like a shining pearl (Chorus/Ending)

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1-Feb-04/4:13 AM Reply

A weeping chuff of dignity. -10-

[9] zodiac 1-Feb-04/6:39 AM Reply

The cool thing about selling lyrics to boy-bands would be to make the first letters of each line spell something like "WE ALL WORSHIP SATAN - AND WE'RE GAY". Then when the song was released you could point it out to all your friends.

[9] zodiac 1-Feb-04/6:40 AM Reply

Unhearted isn't a word. I can't tell if you knew that.

[5] NanceXToo 5-Feb-04/12:53 PM Reply

This isn't bad...lyric wise. I mean, i can kinda 'hear' it as a song. As a poem I'd consider it more lacking. Anyway, my only major suggestion to you is to revise your chorus because the line with the phrase "an idea stupid" is quite awkward and way too forced a rhyme.