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i spin you like a top (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil i spin you like a top
from your towel
the beach is empty
the sky can cover us
while we lie together
my back in the hot sand
i'll hide in your shadow
the taste of the sea
already fills our mouths
let it drip from your body
warm upon my stomach
racing the slow draw
and crash of the surf
Up the ladder:
the first sight is everything
Down the ladder:
Luicidity
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Posted: May 11, 2002 3:24 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:24 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.878157 Overall Rank: 10311 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.55
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6-Sep-02/10:46 AM
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Excellent poem. Check this one out Beaker. A young and sober Bukowski. Influences showing right through, eh? What a first image.
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