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i spin you like a top (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil

i spin you like a top from your towel the beach is empty the sky can cover us while we lie together my back in the hot sand i'll hide in your shadow the taste of the sea already fills our mouths let it drip from your body warm upon my stomach racing the slow draw and crash of the surf

poetandknowit 6-Sep-02/10:46 AM
Excellent poem. Check this one out Beaker. A young and sober Bukowski. Influences showing right through, eh? What a first image.




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