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A Part of Me (Free verse) by Quarton
I once viewed the world in comfort
with my beliefs though, I can no longer
take refuge in them knowing
there remains no sustainable thesis,
no Gospel to safely build on--
initial premise fatally flawed.
A crumbling foundation unable to support
notions once perceived as fact,
burdened by prior ideas of a universe
out there, existing in seclusion--
now undone by the world of quantum.
where all is transformed and unified.
A fantasy-like state emerging from
the ashes of Descarte who thought he was
and, from his Cartesian view, therefore was.
Though between mirage and reality--
like the desert traveler with cupped hands,
yielding only undrinkable sand,
lies the illusion of the magician's sleight
of hand--things not always as they seem.
While the quark and lepton dance hand in hand
to the cosmic beat of uncertainty.
Commonsense contradictions the rule,
world transformed--fresh concepts born
as I gaze skyward, now able to see--
the moon and stars are a part of me.
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Posted: February 7, 2007 4:24 PM PST; Last modified: February 7, 2007 4:24 PM PST
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mind-set seems to be fair game though rather abstract which makes for a difficult subject to write about.
Thanks for the read and comments.