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Holy Tits

Member since 2007 · Posted 18 Jan 2007 · 3 comments

I look down and C Someone hairy Lying on top of me Sucking my tits With his cunty tongue. I can see his fucking bald patch, I must be getting desperate.

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A favorite of Engelbert Humpalot, conny lingers, Edna Sweetlove.

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[10] Stephen Robins 19-Jan-07/8:38 AM Reply

Sexual, provocative and rather meaningful. It evokes the smell of sunlight and the dappled flowing of a drying stream. A tour de force.

[10] Edna Sweetlove 19-Jan-07/9:02 AM Reply

This indeed has a very fine poetic flow to it. May I suggest you comment on your lover's dandruff too? And one thing about bald patches is that you can see how filthy the scalp is. You can spot headlice more easily as well. I think I feel a poem coming on about this subject....................

[10] conny lingers 7-Feb-21/12:09 PM Reply

Ho ho ho.