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Holy Tits (Free verse) by Holy Tits I look down and
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Someone hairy
Lying on top of me
Sucking my tits
With his cunty tongue.
I can see his fucking bald patch,
I must be getting desperate.
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Posted: January 18, 2007 7:33 AM PST; Last modified: January 18, 2007 7:33 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.9 Overall Rank: 1460 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list: Edna Sweetlove, conny lingers, Engelbert Humpalot Comments:
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Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199
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19-Jan-07/8:38 AM
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Sexual, provocative and rather meaningful. It evokes the smell of sunlight and the dappled flowing of a drying stream. A tour de force.
This indeed has a very fine poetic flow to it. May I suggest you comment on your lover's dandruff too? And one thing about bald patches is that you can see how filthy the scalp is. You can spot headlice more easily as well. I think I feel a poem coming on about this subject....................
Ho ho ho.
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