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Holy Tits (Free verse) by Holy Tits

I look down and C Someone hairy Lying on top of me Sucking my tits With his cunty tongue. I can see his fucking bald patch, I must be getting desperate.

Edna Sweetlove 19-Jan-07/9:02 AM
This indeed has a very fine poetic flow to it. May I suggest you comment on your lover's dandruff too? And one thing about bald patches is that you can see how filthy the scalp is. You can spot headlice more easily as well. I think I feel a poem coming on about this subject....................




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