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I want to press my fingertips (Free verse) by bwaha I want to press my fingertips up to your
fingertips. hard and gentle
skin to skin
human life expressed
in 20 digits.
Up the ladder:
Monday Morning
Down the ladder:
I've thought a lot
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Posted: December 5, 2006 6:47 AM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2006 6:47 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5290 Comments:
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5-Dec-06/8:48 PM
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I like this. Alot said in a few words.
Nice. Reminds me a bit of "i like my body when it is with your body".
I dig it. Perhaps some other word(s) can maintain the sensitivity of this piece better than "human life". Sorry I don't have a suitable substitute at the ready.
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