I want to press my fingertips

by bwaha

Member since 2006 · Posted 5 Dec 2006 · 3 comments

I want to press my fingertips up to your fingertips. hard and gentle skin to skin human life expressed in 20 digits.

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[8] deleted user 5-Dec-06/8:48 PM Reply

I like this. Alot said in a few words.

[9] Ranger 8-Dec-06/5:02 AM Reply

Nice. Reminds me a bit of "i like my body when it is with your body".

[8] EAger to Offend 18-Apr-07/9:48 PM Reply

I dig it. Perhaps some other word(s) can maintain the sensitivity of this piece better than "human life". Sorry I don't have a suitable substitute at the ready.