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I want to press my fingertips (Free verse) by bwaha

I want to press my fingertips up to your fingertips. hard and gentle skin to skin human life expressed in 20 digits.

EAger to Offend 18-Apr-07/9:48 PM
I dig it. Perhaps some other word(s) can maintain the sensitivity of this piece better than "human life". Sorry I don't have a suitable substitute at the ready.




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