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Member since 2005 · Posted 28 Aug 2006 · Edited 15 Oct 2006 · 4 comments

Well I forget the day I forgot your name. I donât even recall the day we met. But I donât even think it really matters anymore. So when you see me laying in bed. Do me a favor dear and pretend Iâm dead. Iâm used to not seeing things for what Iâve heard theyâre supposed to be. Maybe Iâm just blind to the obvious. Iâm a simple man worried about the future and when Iâll get to sooner rather then later. Well I forget the day I forgot my name. I donât even think it really matters anyway. Iâm a colorless man. Blind to subtleties and what I say I believe. Just forget Iâm even here. I donât even remember what my point was.

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[8] Ranger 29-Aug-06/12:14 PM Reply

Really good read. I swear I've seen the same title somewhere else before though.

[9] nypoet22 12-Oct-06/5:43 PM Reply

i like the structure. i agree with ranger about the name.

[2] Sing4Jesus! 13-Oct-06/3:53 PM Reply

Not much about Jesus here, is there?

[n/a] Wakeboarder20 › Sing4Jesus! 13-Oct-06/6:58 PM Reply

Um...no? I take it that if it's not about Jesus, it's bad in your book? Ok, gotcha.