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Unconscious (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Halves and shapes rotate to
Dispel me into awful corners
While drafts from portraits
Pictures of wind that scatter me
Like rain or empty threats
Crowd to be small enough
I hope for hoping enough
Will see me through the day
Slightly bearing my weight
If only for a while
There are strong angles
Cutting letters for reading
Deep into my skull
That's happily arranged I know
But if too late is right
Then too early directs me
And I will follow none to such lengths
As destroying my destination
Even one so well and timely happened
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9770
Posted: December 19, 2005 8:16 PM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2005 8:16 PM PST
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