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Jennifer Logan (Free verse) by rahson_s
Since day one we measured love through the
eyes of our parents respectfully,
on the other side of the tracks is
where we sought this habit entitled
love, I can't help but wonder
who's responsible for bringing two of the
world's greatest together, some say God
listens to all rumors, pillow talk and whispers,
his patience similar to our dedication to his son,
provided we both worship different Gods,
our bond prepares us for an after life we
both never dare to question, we live for today,
in your eyes I see my future clearly, a wife, children,
a house with a finished basement for
me and my friends, just think, I was fourteen
when we first spoke, eighteen when I asked
to borrow your pen and twenty two when
our eyes met and we both took notice,
thereafter we became one, focused and
never to be disturbed by friends, family or those
who envied our understanding, like your ex boyfriend,
mother and her new boyfriend, regardless to what
they say may we lay early and sleep late,
kiss but never confess, make love yet never climax,
because of you I see why God made woman
and why my mother then made me, as long as
I'm able to appreciate love I'll always keep
my promise to hold you, call you and place you first,
I love you Jennifer Logan, just because
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Posted: July 10, 2006 10:33 AM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2006 10:33 AM PDT
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