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Veins of spilt wine. (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
With time comes paradox and its riddle,
a malformed poem crafted to puzzle the poet
convinced of it's insignificance, his
frustration stigmatized by capricious alienation.
And subtle intricacies emerge incognito from
tense silence, this mordant chasm: An
absence of bliss, strung-out on methedrine,
intolerant of things foolish, mundane,
bones sucked dry, left
Devoid of substance.
Devoid of substance and wrenched,
a rogue of the gallows without chance,
solaced by knowing the exact date
and time his feet shall death dance
in an embrace of apathetic emptiness--
intransigent, a ghostly-grim humorist
rebel disciple of the passive fist.
There's little worth enduring
in the company of solitude, disgruntled,
occupied with melancholic dreams of
self-realization, self-idealization, or
resigned to idle contemplation, driven,
by scorn and an appetite for self-loathing.
Noetic thorns prick fingertips, willow-stanced
in retreat. Thoughts stem from an undertow urge to
be the victim, despite vulgar bravado-- my will to
engage foemen in confrontation countermined, left
Devoid of substance.
Devoid of substance and wrenched, loud-mouthed,
distant, a rogue of the gallows stooped in stance,
content to mock death and dance, intransigent;
a ghostly-grim humorist suffocated by pessimism.
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Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6418
Posted: July 18, 2004 1:03 PM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2004 1:03 PM PDT
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