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An unfinished lyric (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom What is a gentlemen
If not a Patient wolf
Dressed to Impress
Wearing the Best
In Sheep's Clothing
Masked with a devilish grin
They will let him in
Pass the gates
Through the hallway
Enter the Ballroom
Where we'll make our way
To the center stage
And watch as the story unfolds
Before our eyes
Que our leading lady
As she makes her way down the stairs
Spot light shining bright
She is the center of attention tonight
Up the ladder:
solving the world's problems through poetry
Down the ladder:
A Kiss In Shadows (quite happy for me)
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Posted: May 31, 2006 9:18 PM PDT; Last modified: May 31, 2006 9:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6439 Comments:
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Decent rhymes without being overly inventive. I really liked the first stanza and the first half of stanza two.
I'd like to see this complete, for sure.