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The better liar doesn't have to say a damn thing (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
I made it out alive When we both know I'm known for getting... Forget it, let's just get going This nightmare is almost over It gets easier to understand When you see, I see, I can see That the better liar Stares back in the mirror The evidence was there all along So easy to over look, when I looked over I'm known for getting... Forget it, let's just get going This painted scene has always been Easy to get lost in the colors of A place that you've been Yet I made it back to, to you know A whole lot of this Still remains unseen And I'm known for getting... Forget it, let's just get going

Up the ladder: Couplet
Down the ladder: earshot

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6481
Posted: June 7, 2006 12:59 PM PDT; Last modified: June 7, 2006 12:59 PM PDT
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