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An unfinished lyric (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

What is a gentlemen If not a Patient wolf Dressed to Impress Wearing the Best In Sheep's Clothing Masked with a devilish grin They will let him in Pass the gates Through the hallway Enter the Ballroom Where we'll make our way To the center stage And watch as the story unfolds Before our eyes Que our leading lady As she makes her way down the stairs Spot light shining bright She is the center of attention tonight

Ranger 1-Jun-06/5:10 AM
'Cue'.

Decent rhymes without being overly inventive. I really liked the first stanza and the first half of stanza two.

I'd like to see this complete, for sure.




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