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hiding demon (Free verse) by pollywolly the demon inside me
fights his way to the surface
when i become to close
to my only friend
who hides,
hides in the glass before me
whispering seductively
"come drink me"
"come drink me"
Up the ladder:
meeting her gaze
Down the ladder:
A Father's Day Late
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Posted: April 22, 2006 12:22 AM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2006 12:22 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9179 Comments:
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patty t @ 70.30.214.253
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26-Apr-06/5:08 PM
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a typo in line 3 -'too' the repetition of 'hides' is a bit heavyhanded
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