poemranker ::hiding demon by pollywolly

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Free verse № 142572

hiding demon

Member since 2006 · Posted 22 Apr 2006 · 1 comment

the demon inside me fights his way to the surface when i become to close to my only friend who hides, hides in the glass before me whispering seductively "come drink me" "come drink me"

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[7] patty t 26-Apr-06/5:08 PM Reply
a typo in line 3 -'too' the repetition of 'hides' is a bit heavyhanded