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hiding demon
(
Free verse
) by
pollywolly
the demon inside me fights his way to the surface when i become to close to my only friend who hides, hides in the glass before me whispering seductively "come drink me" "come drink me"
patty t
26-Apr-06/5:08 PM
a typo in line 3 -'too' the repetition of 'hides' is a bit heavyhanded
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