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take a jump with me (Free verse) by hendrimike
it's all simple to me
the way that love can be
a game of unspoken rules
with an ending that's usually cruel
but this time i'm not so sure
you blossom with light so pure
listen to what can be saved
believe in the future that's cloudy and grey
close your eyes and use your heart
my hand is your guide in the dark
jump out of the boat and into the sea
and believe you will be alright with me
just let yourself go
as we plunge below
into the dark water
holding on to each other
as we swim further away
from doubt and dismay
we reach the otherside
with nothing to hide
you wear my heart on your sleeve
and i'll make you proud to be
the most beautiful girl i have ever seen
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8442
Posted: April 15, 2006 3:59 AM PDT; Last modified: April 15, 2006 3:59 AM PDT
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