poemranker ::Mexican Party in the Park by New Life Drug

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 112001

Mexican Party in the Park

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Sep 2004 · 0 comments

The crickets whisper your name And I drift into dreams of you So meet me in the shadow Past the Mexican party And hold me close Never take me home We can drink Mucho Mango It's vitamin C fortified In the grass will we lay Like the lovers oblivious that the public isn't invisible Read me a story outloud Although I won't listen I'll just stare at your eyes The ones that blink In flashes of blue On a blanket of comfort We'll fall asleep after we Gape up at spaces between These branches and leaves I've noticed people in love walk slow But you and I, We don't need to move

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 4.75 weighted 4.97 rank 8438 views 275 View voting details →

4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far

0 comments

Nobody has said anything yet.