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Mexican Party in the Park (Free verse) by New Life Drug
The crickets whisper your name
And I drift into dreams of you
So meet me in the shadow
Past the Mexican party
And hold me close
Never take me home
We can drink Mucho Mango
It's vitamin C fortified
In the grass will we lay
Like the lovers oblivious
that the public isn't invisible
Read me a story outloud
Although I won't listen
I'll just stare at your eyes
The ones that blink
In flashes of blue
On a blanket of comfort
We'll fall asleep after we
Gape up at spaces between
These branches and leaves
I've noticed
people in love walk slow
But you and I,
We don't need to move
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8435
Posted: September 9, 2004 10:50 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2004 10:50 PM PDT
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