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run'em'hard (Free verse) by grendal
star light star bright i see you till suns in sight i wish i may i wish i might to not see stars till sun light. I AM A SALTON kiss the ring smell the the flower the alure intranses my inner power. i want to be your friend introduce to my friend i see you need me to lend] a hand. SALTON I AM dabble you do dable you will now i have you in my chill. in my reach you can not breach you are as salted as a beach. can you control on you atoll? i think you can I AM A SALTON and when you decide to come down i will shelter safe and sound SALTON AM I? YES I AM now open your hand here is some sand no need for money just lending a hand. you look good great, you are late omn your payment for me to rake.

Up the ladder: oysters
Down the ladder: Stuckaluck

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10687
Posted: February 8, 2006 5:09 PM PST; Last modified: February 8, 2006 5:09 PM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 9-Feb-06/6:32 AM | Reply
Stanza 4 = necromancy? Not sure I get this one but I'm a bit slow, so don't worry. Say hi to horus wherever he is.
[5] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 | 9-Feb-06/3:24 PM | Reply
It's like a retarded Dr. Seuss poem...no offense to you...It just doesn't make any sense.
[n/a] grendal @ 204.126.64.254 > wilco | 16-Feb-06/3:31 PM | Reply
your like Dr.Seuss himself . . . so you should be dead
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