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run'em'hard (Free verse) by grendal
star light star bright
i see you till suns in sight
i wish i may i wish i might
to not see stars till sun light.
I AM A SALTON
kiss the ring
smell the the flower
the alure intranses my inner power.
i want to be your friend
introduce to my friend
i see you need me to lend]
a hand.
SALTON I AM
dabble you do
dable you will
now i have you in my chill.
in my reach
you can not breach
you are as salted as a beach.
can you control
on you atoll?
i think you can
I AM A SALTON
and when you decide
to come down
i will shelter safe and sound
SALTON AM I?
YES I AM
now open your hand
here is some sand
no need for money
just lending a hand.
you look good
great,
you are late
omn your payment for me to rake.
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Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10687
Posted: February 8, 2006 5:09 PM PST; Last modified: February 8, 2006 5:09 PM PST
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