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Coney Island Fall (Free verse) by ecargo
It's the last fast drop
of the season,
and we scream!
The blue tips away.
We're hurled like a swing,
and the air bites
cold this autumn day.
The cars on the Wonder Wheel
lurch and glide--surprise!
they slide! They sway.
Bright as a gull's wing, gleaming,
the Cyclone rises like a seaside sun,
runs along the midway that slouches,
shuffles, hawks its fun.
On this Coney Island Saturday,
the air blares with rap,
the barkers beckon and bray.
We laugh and gape; we run,
two kids, again, at play today.
And the clouds swing past,
spinning in the bright
blue blaze. We rush the edges,
ride the rises, snug
in the naugahyde hug of the seat,
with the world laid out distinct
and small. Hands raised,
we shriek our glee.
We fall, laughing, we fall.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.4
Weighted score: 5.5244927
Overall Rank: 2631
Posted: February 3, 2006 2:38 PM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2006 2:39 PM PST
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