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Member since 2004 · Posted 1 Dec 2005 · 4 comments

NO was writin on my mind Every word, every thought. I left in the night. Not knowing where to go Posted signs, and searches I disappered from them all Hidden in the shadows of the wall From every corner, an eye was watching I kept safe from tourment By every window stood a lamp Always on the watch Not moving would be a mistake Being caught would be worse I rope would be tied From the branch of a tree and a heart would beat no more.

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[3] Dovina 2-Dec-05/10:08 AM Reply

Either you're trying to be funny or this is full of mistakes.

[7] ALChemy 3-Dec-05/7:59 AM Reply

See comments on this page and relate.
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[0] amanda_dcosta 3-Dec-05/9:12 AM Reply

my god

[3] wilco 3-Dec-05/12:54 PM Reply

Good grief, Charlie Brown...let's get a spell checker on this.

"I rope would be tied"? - what the hell does that mean?

Try putting a little thought into your poem...I think it took me longer to read it than it took you to write it.