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Searching (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 NO was writin on my mind
Every word, every thought.
I left in the night.
Not knowing where to go
Posted signs, and searches
I disappered from them all
Hidden in the shadows of the wall
From every corner, an eye was watching
I kept safe from tourment
By every window stood a lamp
Always on the watch
Not moving would be a mistake
Being caught would be worse
I rope would be tied
From the branch of a tree
and a heart would beat no more.
Up the ladder:
Wha wha guitar: Part 2
Down the ladder:
tobago, my tara
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Posted: December 1, 2005 8:46 PM PST; Last modified: December 1, 2005 8:46 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.506941 Overall Rank: 12793 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.104
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2-Dec-05/10:08 AM
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Either you're trying to be funny or this is full of mistakes.
my god
Good grief, Charlie Brown...let's get a spell checker on this.
"I rope would be tied"? - what the hell does that mean? Try putting a little thought into your poem...I think it took me longer to read it than it took you to write it. 218 view(s)
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