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Searching (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
NO was writin on my mind Every word, every thought. I left in the night. Not knowing where to go Posted signs, and searches I disappered from them all Hidden in the shadows of the wall From every corner, an eye was watching I kept safe from tourment By every window stood a lamp Always on the watch Not moving would be a mistake Being caught would be worse I rope would be tied From the branch of a tree and a heart would beat no more.

Up the ladder: Wha wha guitar: Part 2
Down the ladder: Deceiving

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1666667
Weighted score: 4.506941
Overall Rank: 12760
Posted: December 1, 2005 8:46 PM PST; Last modified: December 1, 2005 8:46 PM PST
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[3] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 2-Dec-05/10:08 AM | Reply
Either you're trying to be funny or this is full of mistakes.
[7] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 3-Dec-05/7:59 AM | Reply
See comments on this page and relate.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=134444
[0] amanda_dcosta @ 203.145.159.37 | 3-Dec-05/9:12 AM | Reply
my god
[3] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 | 3-Dec-05/12:54 PM | Reply
Good grief, Charlie Brown...let's get a spell checker on this.

"I rope would be tied"? - what the hell does that mean?

Try putting a little thought into your poem...I think it took me longer to read it than it took you to write it.

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