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Searching (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

NO was writin on my mind Every word, every thought. I left in the night. Not knowing where to go Posted signs, and searches I disappered from them all Hidden in the shadows of the wall From every corner, an eye was watching I kept safe from tourment By every window stood a lamp Always on the watch Not moving would be a mistake Being caught would be worse I rope would be tied From the branch of a tree and a heart would beat no more.

wilco 3-Dec-05/12:54 PM
Good grief, Charlie Brown...let's get a spell checker on this.

"I rope would be tied"? - what the hell does that mean?

Try putting a little thought into your poem...I think it took me longer to read it than it took you to write it.





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