poemranker ::Intimate Joy by flightoffancy

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Intimate Joy

by flightoffancy

Member since 2005 · Posted 24 Oct 2005 · 2 comments

The sun sinks with a sigh, gazing with longing at the moon. Knowing he can never have his distant mistress, unable to cross the uncrossable void. Once I looked into that void, never finding what I sought. Now your arms reach for me and the nothingness becomes the intimate joy we know as love.

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[8] zodiac 25-Oct-05/12:57 PM Reply
By a bizarre coincidence, a guy in this internet cafe just asked me what the English word "intimate" means. I'm afraid to ask why he wants to know.
[6] wilco 25-Oct-05/7:17 PM Reply
The uncrossable void line doesn't really work