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Free verse № 130702

Cat Poem

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Sep 2005 · 2 comments

Looking out my kitchen window Shining sun came through The cloud were moving to and fro Beneath the sky so blue I saw a little kitten there Just playing in the street He circled thus with little care He pranced around so sweet I looked at him, he back at me We caught each other's eye He came across the road to see For sure he was not shy And as he came I felt a joy So deep inside my chest Standing there I was a boy Whose heart had just beat best Peacefully, I went to go And hold the small feline I held him in my fingers so And broke his little spine I hate cats

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[8] Tintagiles 7-Sep-05/7:18 PM Reply
Aww. That's lovely. I'd recommend getting rid of the last line, though. It works well with it, but it seems like a touch of gilt to a lily. If you like flowers that way, on the other hand...
[7] wilco 7-Sep-05/9:00 PM Reply
Hmm, I hate cats too but I don't know if I'd go that far..still a good poem though.