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Mexican Monday (Lyric) by A_Dark_Calm
Ruby Tuesdays have come and gone With me sitting in this restaurant And wondering what you’re doing right now Wednesday’s Wendy's fries and a coke An old friend tries to tell me a joke Coz he knows I’m missing having you around Thursday’s are thirsty days Drinking all my troubles away Wishing you were here to sober my soul TGI Friday’s aren’t so grateful I’ve got nothing here on my table Coz I know you’re so far from my hold Saturday’s are don’t matter days While everyone else runs and plays I’m counting every minute till you’re here Sunday’s are still holy to me It's one more day and I know I’ll see The girl all week I’ve been holding so dear Mexican Monday, you bring me my girl You change my day and you change my world for what are six days when her love is eternal Oh mexican Monday you bring me my girl

Up the ladder: GIRL IN THE RED DRESS
Down the ladder: a night of solitude

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5938
Posted: February 20, 2007 7:37 AM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2007 7:37 AM PST
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Comments:
[10] Lola @ 61.17.226.26 | 20-Feb-07/8:57 AM | Reply
Yes, Mexican Monday will bring you your girl. Love this piece.
[8] Dovina @ 75.82.86.162 | 20-Feb-07/3:47 PM | Reply
Ah, the insensitivity of lovers to the intricacy of words, to the seemingly unwitting lush outsiders feel, to the goddess whims of the neglected, or angelic twitters of the left. To be in love is a splendid thing, far better than poetry or idle chat. Best wishes.
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