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Eagle (Haiku) by Mr Pig
Soaring above fields. Swooping through clouds and sunlight, shadow over prey.

Up the ladder: Little Fly
Down the ladder: What bianca saw!!!

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8084
Posted: June 24, 2005 7:50 AM PDT; Last modified: June 24, 2005 7:50 AM PDT
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[n/a] Blue Magpie @ 212.205.251.23 | 24-Jun-05/11:17 PM | Reply
Actually eagles try not to shadow over prey until after they have got their talons into it because the shadow is a warning to the prey.
[n/a] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 > Blue Magpie | 1-Jul-05/3:01 AM | Reply
Shut up Blue Magpie, do relish techinical detail if so you miss the point of poetry. Imagine your take on the work of Wordsworth:

"I wandered lonely as a cloud"

Actually, clouds can't be lonely as they are formed of water vapour and don't have feelings, and often clouds appear in groups known as "fronts" so even if they did have feelings, which they don't, then they would not actually be lonely.

you birk.
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