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Hades Ain't Far Enough (Free verse) by MacFrantic
So long as the biting winds and the sky enraged tower over vale casting dread upon the dalliers I among others shall walk in great strides to hasten my escape from eternity And it is a long journey indeed but to hell is so much farther than forever

Up the ladder: Bus Fare Home
Down the ladder: Hair

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.230521
Overall Rank: 4233
Posted: January 27, 2005 11:12 PM PST; Last modified: January 27, 2005 11:12 PM PST
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[10] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51 | 28-Jan-05/10:11 AM | Reply
"dread upon the dalliers" - nice

I like this one, MF.
[9] wilco @ 24.165.207.93 | 28-Jan-05/6:41 PM | Reply
This one I likes.
[7] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 29-Jan-05/5:41 PM | Reply
right
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