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Echo On The Rocks (Other) by PsydewaysTears
Like ladybugs In October You reappeared to me. You waited 'til The world was ill To come and set me free. I prayed for you And late you came. Some prayers are best unheard. Your tears slipped out, They pleaded me— I left without a word. I'd rather be Alone and lost And here without a hope, Than glued to you, Upon that cliff Without my faithful slope.
Down the ladder: Roses
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4057
Posted: December 30, 2004 1:22 AM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2004 1:22 AM PST
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[8] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 30-Dec-04/12:05 PM | Reply
Comes the picky Dovina, like a bluejay to eat the ladybugs, and ask what all this means. Or rather to say again that I think the thing should give enough clues that I wouldn't have to ask. Okay, she cried, you left, and you feel okay with ending the codependence.
[n/a] PsydewaysTears @ 69.240.74.35 > Dovina | 31-Dec-04/2:16 AM | Reply
You've got it. This pretty much means exactly what you've taken from it.

•°•Gregory James•°•
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