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Blue (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera The wind will tell me
Secrets in my sleep
Some I cannot avoid and
It is hard to resist
The wind will call me
Soldier in my sleep
Something I cannot avoid and
It is hard to remember
The wind will leave me
Longing in my sleep
Sometimes for things I should avoid but
It is hard to restrain
The wind will never cease
To gust upon my face
Somewhere far away from here
Somewhere far but somewhere near
Up the ladder:
Jack
Down the ladder:
Always there
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Posted: November 2, 2004 7:00 AM PST; Last modified: May 12, 2005 11:43 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7362 Comments:
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Sasha @ 69.138.240.116
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2-Nov-04/9:47 AM
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Very interesting use of form
with Can't it would read more fluent. Same with
sometimes for things I should avoid but: 'sometimes for things to avoid but' 201 view(s)
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