Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Authentication (Free verse) by hatedestruction
made real from your deceit fabricated from the integrity to redefine taking medicine for our relief complications destroying sense of time life taken and death given to the remorseful citizens lost in the solution to a decision blotted down with blood red pens from the inside it turned outside red outside the inside is surely something dead

Up the ladder: To my Love
Down the ladder: The Dreamhole

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 30
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7291
Posted: April 27, 2004 6:23 AM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2004 6:23 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[7] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 27-Apr-04/9:56 AM | Reply
Some punctuation would help. I sort of get it.
165 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001