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Authentication

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Apr 2004 · 1 comment

made real from your deceit fabricated from the integrity to redefine taking medicine for our relief complications destroying sense of time life taken and death given to the remorseful citizens lost in the solution to a decision blotted down with blood red pens from the inside it turned outside red outside the inside is surely something dead

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[7] deleted user 27-Apr-04/9:56 AM Reply
Some punctuation would help. I sort of get it.