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merry-go-round (Free verse) by thing1
late
one Saturday afternoon,
my sister Genelle,
my mother,
and I
sit
in the family room
watching
Sesame Street.
when SLAP
I let
Genelle
have it,
right
across
the
face.
tears
begin
to fall
from my sister's eyes.
looking
at the twisted countenance
of my mother,
who has just witnessed
a devilish deed,
I take off
running
in circles;
from family room
to foyer
from foyer
to living room
from living room
to kitchen
and back again.
my mother follows me,
round and round
until she gets tired.
I notice her fatigue,
and stop,
gloating,
that I have won.
in the blink of an eye,
a hand comes down.
GOTCHA!
my mother walks
away, smiling,
with bad
old
me
in tow.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7323
Posted: April 8, 2004 8:12 AM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2004 8:12 AM PDT
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