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Illegal Lying Sins (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
You read all my awful poetry
Go ahead, patronize me
Verbalize the world I live in
Vomit out the wordsâ¦
That Are Illegal Lying Sins
Iâm not ready, ready
To go away with you, Ready
To shoot the sky with you, Prepared
To look up to⦠Ready Ready Ready
To shop for a heart
I know it doesnât make much sense
Iâm writing poetry instead of building a fenceâ¦Around me
Iâm whining and griping about all these different things
None Action; Just cliché thoughts and minds it always brings
Iâm ready
âYou Are?â So happily
Yes
âYes! I will!â So expectantly
I want to leave you
ââ¦â Shocked
Away away I am
Away away we are
Separate Separate from the things we did
Shouting Shouting and lieing is resting bed
Iâve got a good picture of thisâ¦
A photo memory of me and you⦠your
Face is cut out; No facial expression
On your face is the sun
Bright, shines on everything,
Reveals everything
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7771
Posted: October 6, 2004 4:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2004 4:38 PM PDT
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EEEE!!!111!11!!11 I love it when we finish each others sentences... Just like in High School! ^_^