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SHOT (Free verse) by tisa7 I want to die
Please let me say goodbye
so dont worry about me
I've moved on already
I was in the parking lot
When I made that fatal shot
Theres blood all around
As I lay on the ground
I'm sorry I caused you so much pain
Theres nothing to gain
I dont feel mad now
And I know how
Because I shot myself
Up the ladder:
view from the top
Down the ladder:
Second Sight
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Posted: August 30, 2004 2:10 PM PDT; Last modified: March 30, 2006 11:39 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7367 Comments:
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frdup717 @ 64.12.116.67
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8-Feb-05/1:37 PM
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not2shabby
thanx
"me" doesn't rhyme with "already." Sorry, that probably makes you want to die even more.
well i think it sounded pretty good so i dont care
If I was to doooooooo it, nice hot bath, bottle of wine, bit of muzik, slit the old wrists brother. There's no art to the gun. The big disappointment is you didn't die.
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