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SHOT (Free verse) by tisa7

I want to die Please let me say goodbye so dont worry about me I've moved on already I was in the parking lot When I made that fatal shot Theres blood all around As I lay on the ground I'm sorry I caused you so much pain Theres nothing to gain I dont feel mad now And I know how Because I shot myself

Garrett S Sexton 31-Mar-06/1:28 PM
If I was to doooooooo it, nice hot bath, bottle of wine, bit of muzik, slit the old wrists brother. There's no art to the gun. The big disappointment is you didn't die.




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