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SHOT (Free verse) by tisa7

I want to die Please let me say goodbye so dont worry about me I've moved on already I was in the parking lot When I made that fatal shot Theres blood all around As I lay on the ground I'm sorry I caused you so much pain Theres nothing to gain I dont feel mad now And I know how Because I shot myself

tisa7 12-Apr-06/1:02 PM
well i think it sounded pretty good so i dont care




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