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Out Of My Mind (Free verse) by Enchantres
The sun goes slowly under
My beautiful horizon
There's a thunder, everything will turn pitch black
And I'm scared, because I can't read you at all
Where are your arms, when I get lonely?
Those who holding me tightly
And don't let go, those who are warm and gentle
I can't feel them at all
They were never there
Only in my mind
And it's still dark, and I'm still scared
But then I realise, I wake up
I see the sun rising up again in the South
A beautiful light who made me see everything
Everything I didn't wanted to see
The thunder is over, so are you
No more joy, no more grief
No more pretending
Words can no longer hurt
Your pitch black, your out of my mind
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5936
Posted: August 24, 2004 12:29 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2004 12:29 PM PDT
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It's almost my turn in the pie aborting contest.