Out Of My Mind

Member since 2004 · Posted 24 Aug 2004 · 2 comments

The sun goes slowly under My beautiful horizon There's a thunder, everything will turn pitch black And I'm scared, because I can't read you at all Where are your arms, when I get lonely? Those who holding me tightly And don't let go, those who are warm and gentle I can't feel them at all They were never there Only in my mind And it's still dark, and I'm still scared But then I realise, I wake up I see the sun rising up again in the South A beautiful light who made me see everything Everything I didn't wanted to see The thunder is over, so are you No more joy, no more grief No more pretending Words can no longer hurt Your pitch black, your out of my mind

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[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 24-Aug-04/11:54 PM Reply

Yep, "there's a thunder" brewing below my chaps.
It's almost my turn in the pie aborting contest.

[8] SupremeDreamer 25-Aug-04/7:07 AM Reply

To the point, clear and distinct. I could probly learn a thing or two there.. all mystic and doped as I am.. -noted-

Ah, yes, Blessed with eight.