poemranker ::Friends by Dovina

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Free verse № 110703

Friends

Member since 2004 · Posted 17 Aug 2004 · 5 comments

We stand for asparagus and music as therapy for a mind of age twenty and memory of fifty for the x in sex. With e for enigma and love’s death-like future we look for unnoticed rabbits and bums and hope for spontaneity at a midnight keyboard. With edgy smiles and propriety’s curse we despise mundane prose and anything trite and prefer a good poem to the morning news. We let the dishes go unwashed, the car ungassed let the rug gather dust, and the family disgust while we write little missives they don’t understand. May we live long and thrive.

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[9] Dan garcia-Black 18-Aug-04/3:59 AM Reply
A is for artichoke (less phallic than asparagus). Your trip to Ireland has made you a consummate toastmistress. Make mine Merlot. -9-
[n/a] Dovina › Dan garcia-Black 18-Aug-04/4:21 PM Reply
I should have known the phallic nature of asparagus. Ireland has made me a consumate toast appreciator. Cheers with merlot.
[8] Enchantres 18-Aug-04/1:25 PM Reply
I really liked reading you poem.
[n/a] Dovina › Enchantres 18-Aug-04/4:22 PM Reply
Thanks, I'm enchanted.
[8] wilco 19-Aug-04/5:15 PM Reply
As aways, good job. This one lacks a little something, however. Not sure what...