Embrace

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Aug 2004 · Edited 13 Apr 2006 · 2 comments

Chilly Upstairs bedroom And all I know in this If much overworn constriction Is love

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[5] Dovina 13-Apr-06/3:58 PM Reply

The grammar is off in the last two lines. I think it says that all you know is love. Okay, but that's not saying much.

[n/a] MacFrantic › Dovina 13-Apr-06/7:59 PM Reply

I could add commas, but that would ruin the form. And I'm sorry if my poem doesn't say much to you, but it wasn't written for you(I hope).