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Embrace (Cinquain) by MacFrantic

Chilly Upstairs bedroom And all I know in this If much overworn constriction Is love

MacFrantic 13-Apr-06/7:59 PM
I could add commas, but that would ruin the form. And I'm sorry if my poem doesn't say much to you, but it wasn't written for you(I hope).




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