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Embrace (Cinquain) by MacFrantic

Chilly Upstairs bedroom And all I know in this If much overworn constriction Is love

Dovina 13-Apr-06/3:58 PM
The grammar is off in the last two lines. I think it says that all you know is love. Okay, but that's not saying much.




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