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Not Being Me (Free verse) by pinay_miss_azn why is it that when I'm alone,
I feel cold?
Is it because you're not here,
that I don't feel warm?
Or is this how I really am?
If this is how I really am,
then I don't wanna be me,
without you...
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Posted: July 9, 2004 9:33 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2004 9:33 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.6414113 Overall Rank: 12399 Comments:
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titan69 @ 62.31.23.84
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10-Jul-04/12:59 AM
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just be yourself allthe time!
because feeling cold is the only way we can remember what it feels like to be warm. And HOW you are is very different than WHO you are. I would work on the WHO part and let the HOW follow. Keep it up. It sounds like you have a lot more to let out.
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