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Free verse № 107948

Not Being Me

by pinay_miss_azn

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Jul 2004 · 2 comments

why is it that when I'm alone, I feel cold? Is it because you're not here, that I don't feel warm? Or is this how I really am? If this is how I really am, then I don't wanna be me, without you...

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[5] titan69 10-Jul-04/12:59 AM Reply
just be yourself allthe time!
[n/a] Rodavlas 10-Jul-04/6:25 PM Reply
because feeling cold is the only way we can remember what it feels like to be warm. And HOW you are is very different than WHO you are. I would work on the WHO part and let the HOW follow. Keep it up. It sounds like you have a lot more to let out.