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Not Being Me (Free verse) by pinay_miss_azn

why is it that when I'm alone, I feel cold? Is it because you're not here, that I don't feel warm? Or is this how I really am? If this is how I really am, then I don't wanna be me, without you...

Rodavlas 10-Jul-04/6:25 PM
because feeling cold is the only way we can remember what it feels like to be warm. And HOW you are is very different than WHO you are. I would work on the WHO part and let the HOW follow. Keep it up. It sounds like you have a lot more to let out.




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