regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-04/2:56 PM
short sweet and powerful
Re: the salt shaker by elizabethann	24-Apr-04/3:00 PM
powerful and full of emotion. solid structure that gives me a strong sense of breaks and the intended rhythm...peace mike ps: if you didnt know, im the dude who IMed you earlier
Re: sexy by elizabethann	24-Apr-04/3:02 PM
i really like this one. solid topic and powerful portrayal of your feelings. once again, powerful structure to set the rhythm and speed of the poem...keep it up...peace mike